Author | Thread |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
03/07/2004 11:00:09 PM |
Good idea but on my monitor I find it hard to make out the flames. If they were more pronounced I would have rated it higher. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/07/2004 09:51:17 PM |
Wish the flame in her eyes was larger and more pronounced. Seems like she's out of flame. :( |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/07/2004 03:00:20 PM |
If the flame was just a little bigger... |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/05/2004 09:41:46 AM |
Very interesting idea, too bad that the flame doesn't stand out to strengthen the concept. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/05/2004 05:07:23 AM |
Interesting idea, but I think you needed a larger flame to reflect in the eyes to really be able to pull this one off. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/05/2004 04:37:13 AM |
Having both eyes in the composition takes away from the composition. The fire is quite small to make out. Focusing on 1 eye would give the viewer a closer look at the eye and thus the flame. Currently the slanted composition is fairly interesting and is still good. The b&w combined with the touch of color for the fire is good. "8" |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/05/2004 02:46:31 AM |
Not enough detail really the shot itself is very good but the fire aspect is lost
good focus 6 |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/04/2004 11:57:51 PM |
... the microscope in my hand. The flame is just too small. Perhaps if the fire was more brightly colored? I was going to try a similar shot + maybe one using mirrored sunglasses, but the reflections were too small so I gave up. |
|
|
03/04/2004 07:10:18 PM |
I like this composition - the eye in one corner and the arch of the eyebrow diagonally opposite. Catching the reflection of the fire in the eyes is a great idea. It comes off as a bit too subtle - I would like to see more fire - like the reflection from a fireplace. 6 |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/04/2004 05:43:17 AM |
very nice idea, bigger reflections would improve it. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/03/2004 03:05:24 PM |
The "idea" always make me think of a roaring blaze so perhaps a little weak on the theme but a nice picture all the same and well PPed to acheive the effect. 7 |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/02/2004 05:39:55 PM |
I will assume the fire is from a match or a lighter but it is so small it is barely discernible. Nice idea but needs some oomp. The eyes are very nice and the rest of the image is quite fine. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/02/2004 07:24:21 AM |
could you magnify the flames more, I think that would really bring out the picture. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/01/2004 07:54:27 PM |
nicely cropped - perhaps the flames could be larger?? Like the b&w treatment |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/01/2004 12:58:28 PM |
Cool idea! I think that a bit more flame would have made it really stand out. One of my favs as is. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/01/2004 01:45:04 AM |
Just bring up some flame in there those eyes and you got it. But don't get to close. Good luck. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/01/2004 12:25:38 AM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
03/01/2004 12:03:48 AM |
Excellent shot. Why didn't I think of this! I love it. The eye on the left feels a bit cut off to me and the shot overall feels a bit unbalanced. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/14/2025 10:24:45 AM EDT.