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01/17/2008 04:49:43 PM |
Personally, I thought this shot was great. Very artistic from the framing to the colors you choose for the runner against that particular wall. I was disappointed on how it placed.
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01/13/2008 09:28:29 PM |
scalvert: human motion reeks of volition. not natural.
ursula: ah, but look at the hood flying off her head. natural result of air friction and momentum.
muckpond: it's cold! she's running to her car! totally natural! |
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01/13/2008 06:33:02 PM |
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01/12/2008 10:01:08 PM |
Run Jane, run...Love this image!!
Nice colors. |
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01/12/2008 02:43:36 AM |
| Great wall as a backdrop. In some ways it's a bit busy given the scale of the runner. I also think the motion blur in the runner is a little detracting. But I love the wall ;) |
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01/11/2008 08:16:33 PM |
| Good idea. Would have scored more for me if the coat came completely off...ala Superman. |
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01/11/2008 01:03:34 PM |
| I like the use of the contrasting blues and reds, but I find the person to be a bit blurry in some of the photos. |
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01/09/2008 06:54:11 PM |
| Great sense of movement - less great picture quality (over saturated and/or contrasted). You got great energy into the sequence though. |
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01/09/2008 06:11:34 PM |
| Each of the bodies shows the blur of motion, which would be great with a single body in the shot, but the time lapse already portrays that. I'd rather see nice crips subjects. |
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01/09/2008 02:03:00 PM |
| good example of time lapse. the model seems a little out of focus and running across a flat surface isn't the most exciting. the wall is very interesting and the colours are nice against that background. |
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01/09/2008 03:20:19 AM |
| Great use of a contrasting color to highlight the activity, and a good example of sequential action |
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01/08/2008 01:00:04 PM |
| Im more attracted to the wall then I am to the subject. Next time, I would make the background less distracting, good idea though. |
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01/07/2008 11:41:10 PM |
| This has more of an 'art' feel to it and less of a soulless, 'I'm just using the technique' feel that so many other entries suffer from. |
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01/07/2008 11:24:11 PM |
| Oh I like this one! Something about it really draws me in, great job!! |
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01/07/2008 08:58:34 PM |
| Nicely captured! Love the saturation level and the hat flapping off! I gave this an 8 in voting. |
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01/07/2008 07:55:05 PM |
| Very nice. You may have done better with a simpler background. I know that you have a focus on the brick, but with it being so busy and with the runner's motion blur, it gives the appearance that you don't have a focus. Your colors look great, and I love how the hood comes off part way through, it makes the story that much better |
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01/07/2008 06:24:39 PM |
| While the bricks make a really cool background, I think they almost distract from the subject of the image. |
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01/07/2008 01:28:52 PM |
| I like how the hood falls off, adds another element. :) |
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01/07/2008 12:30:52 PM |
| I find the brick wall to be a more interesting than your main subject running. This one just doesn't seem to go it for me. The image looks like your camera was focused more on the wall that draws my attention than the runner. 5. |
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01/07/2008 08:19:48 AM |
| great image - one of my top 3. I love the movement, and the way that you allowed the model to be partially out on each side. |
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01/07/2008 12:18:16 AM |
| that's great! there is nice blur from motion...I love the brickwork and the hood blowing off...nice 8 |
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01/07/2008 12:12:46 AM |
| I wish she had an umbrella. |
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