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01/15/2008 11:25:33 PM |
Not sure what to make with the huge flower covering half the model's face. There is also a less desirable reflection of the flower in the lens. |
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01/15/2008 10:55:24 PM |
I like the unification of color but not so much the subject matter. I guess its just to simple for me. |
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01/15/2008 04:04:16 PM |
the pose seems a bit contrived. Maybe a tighter crop of just her face and flower would help. her shoulders just seem a bit too tense. also the lighting is a bit harsh. Maybe a darker background and lit from one side or bounced from behind would make it more dramatic/effective. |
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01/12/2008 03:45:03 PM |
This is nicely done, however most of the photo appears to have a faint greenish cast to it... if there was any way to fix that that might improve the image. Otherwise this is great! |
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01/12/2008 12:09:33 AM |
The lighting and coloring seems off. |
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01/10/2008 08:18:55 PM |
i think if the background were not yellow, it would bring the subject out a little more. otherwise a real good pic. |
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01/10/2008 04:06:40 PM |
She has a look of fear in her eyes rather than thanks. To my tastes it would have been better not to have the flower covering her face, and for her to have a big smile. |
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01/10/2008 01:45:49 PM |
This is nice. I think the main thing I would try to change is to increase th contrast. |
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01/10/2008 01:40:28 PM |
Not quite enough depth of field - the flowers should either be as sharp as the face or very much out of focus. |
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