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02/07/2008 05:00:56 PM |
| Oops, I started to leave a comment and changed my mind, but just realized I had submitted an empty comment with only the word "I". Anyhow, to complete my thought, I think the mixed lighting makes this appear too artificial -- it seems as if the girl is standing in front of a poster of the sea (maybe she was?). |
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02/07/2008 02:44:39 PM |
| Think I see what you were going for, but there are too many elements which distract - the shirt, the writing on the shirt, the ship/rig in the background, crooked horizon, blown sky, the pose/facial expression - but mostly that this looks 'spriteish'. |
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02/07/2008 12:46:25 AM |
| Though a good idea compositionally speaking the processing of the skin has gone way overboard. Looks too plastic. |
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02/03/2008 09:19:54 PM |
| Clarity and composition are nice. Lighting is too harsh. |
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02/03/2008 05:56:38 PM |
| Overall, it is a nice image, though it looks like there is a war ship in the background, which is in contrast to the prayer/title. |
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02/02/2008 05:44:24 AM |
| The child looks awfully edited and cut-in, it is cut-in, right? The background and the kid just doesn't complement eachother. |
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02/01/2008 05:14:23 PM |
3 things:
The child is overly soft (compared to the background)
The child looks cut & pasted (very noticeable & unnatural)
The child's shirt is distracting (a solid color shirt would've been ideal)
Make that 4, the title is overkill
something positive... I like the background, even tho it is very overexposed. |
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02/01/2008 03:00:39 PM |
| Nice idea, but the flash makes it seem like the child was pasted in. And the clothing is somewhat distracting ("off road" doesn't seem to match the religious theme) Maybe a sillouette would have done the idea more justice? |
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