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Off the Wall
Off the Wall
chaitanyan


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Challenge: Portrait with Spectacles (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot Pro1
Location: La Pietra Hawaii School for Girls
Date: Jan 7, 2008
Aperture: f/6.3
Shutter: 1/30
Date Uploaded: Jan 8, 2008

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Statistics
Place: 168 out of 209
Avg (all users): 4.5208
Avg (commenters): 4.5385
Avg (participants): 4.3377
Avg (non-participants): 4.5957
Views since voting: 879
Views during voting: 406
Votes: 265
Comments: 13
Favorites: 1 (view)


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/15/2008 11:35:55 PM
I would have liked this more had it been less cluttered.
01/11/2008 01:31:57 PM
There is some glare on the left girl's glasses and the coloring of the picture is a bit funny imo. good idea though.
01/10/2008 11:05:46 PM
i like the angle on this. the sunlight overbears a little and her sweatshirt is close to being washed out.
01/10/2008 10:15:13 PM
Good angle and use of a vanishing point with the wall. Basic editing wouldn't let you soften the bright spots in the sky at upper left, which is really the only distraction I see here. Nice focus on the foreground/first model.
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01/10/2008 04:09:50 PM
Nice crop. I like the warm lighting up above. Why so blue on the subjects? Seems like they would have been better in warm light.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/10/2008 02:39:54 PM
It's not sharp enough.
01/10/2008 01:23:14 PM
I like this more the longer I look at it. I like the perspective of the wall and the way it is echoed by the heights of the models. I really like the colors. The front model's shirt seems to be overexposed some.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/10/2008 10:52:19 AM
This isn't a bad shot but the white balance seems to be off. There's a pretty serious blue case to your subjects. Since the sunlit tree branches, above the wall, look fine, I'm guessing that you had your WB set to day light when your subjects are in shadow - causing a blue cast.

Mixed light sources are really tough.
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01/10/2008 05:11:59 AM
The bright shirt draws my eyes away from the detail in the pic. Pretty models, though.
01/09/2008 12:57:00 PM
I really like the perspective and the subjects expressions, but the lighting/bluish cast doesn't quite do it for me :)
01/09/2008 12:38:07 PM
White balance is off.
01/09/2008 04:53:03 AM
A double portrait :) The image would be better if the foreground girl's pullover was not so overexposed and if there wasn't so much glare in the other girl's spectacles. The image also appears a bit tilted or distorted to me.
01/09/2008 12:44:00 AM
I like you use of perspective. Next time maybe we can get the camera settings so that it doesn't mess up the coloring. Good job though and good choice of models.


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