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Lost in shadows

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Challenge: Abandoned Buildings II (Basic Editing)
Collection: 2008
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Location: Haarlem (NL)
Date: Jan 12, 2008
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/800 s
Date Uploaded: Jan 12, 2008


Place: 219 out of 257
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Views since voting: 844
Views during voting: 333
Votes: 236
Comments: 6
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/19/2008 11:38:24 AM
It looks crooked. Perhaps you could have moved to the right more and taken the shot a bit more straight on. Can't fix this in basic.
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01/18/2008 09:12:05 AM
Hmm...I cant think of anything to say. I just seems a bit boring. The building looks crooked and the trees on the left dont add to it.
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01/17/2008 01:58:36 PM
The building is uneven in the frame and the blue sky on either side does nothing for me. I also don't like how the bottom is cropped out. It looks like nothing is gounding it. It's a cool building but maybe another angle or different crop would make it work better.
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01/17/2008 11:42:51 AM
ok, cool subject with a lot of unused potential: straighten the house, convert to black and white with a red filter to darken out the sky, add more contrast and you'll have a much more powerful composition. you could have also used more of those nice tree branches to the left to give a bit more space to the comp and to give a better view of what surrounds that old house.
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01/17/2008 11:02:38 AM
The odd angle here is killing the shot. If you had stood directly in front of the building (Maybe three steps to your right?), it would have worked better.
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01/16/2008 11:42:58 AM
a little inclined
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