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01/17/2008 02:05:29 PM |
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01/17/2008 09:22:14 AM |
I think this would be a great with a real flower, outdoors in the sunshine (or on a blue background) and if the girl was looking at the camera, and also with a boost in saturation to make it look a bit livelier. Not sure the DOF is really working here either.
I think you have a ncie idea, but didn't do the ebst you could have done with it. |
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01/16/2008 10:40:00 PM |
| Nice idea. The center of the flower is a bit too dominant. Petals are clearly artificial which detracts. Lighting on face seems a bit harsh (and on flower). I like that it's off center and tightly cropped. |
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01/16/2008 12:17:10 PM |
I find this to be a nice photo. Here's a few things that would make me score this much higher (If you'll indulge me!)
- Using a real flower instead of a silk one. This just looks too fake to me.
- Brighter light, making the photo more high key.
- The face is a bit too shiny and unevenly lit. Some makeup and more light would really make a difference. |
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01/16/2008 05:59:09 AM |
| I think this might have worked a bit better if the flower and the face were both in focus. |
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