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03/19/2004 10:09:02 PM |
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03/18/2004 06:40:21 AM |
| I find my eye drawn towards her ear. must be the bright area on it. I want my eyes drawn to the eye, but it is looking WAY away, to where it is hard to even distinguish a pupil. A soft focus would work on here throughout. or a larger DOF to get everything in focus (nose to eye are pretty soft compared to the L shoulder |
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03/16/2004 10:19:02 PM |
| lovely model. good lighting. i think it would have been a little more engaging if we could see more of her eyes. the eyes are the windows into the soul. cliche but true. |
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03/16/2004 08:05:09 PM |
| Very pretty. BOL Just a tad too tight a crop on the left though. Give her room to stare. IMHO |
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03/16/2004 03:30:57 PM |
| Excellent color and lighting. I might have tried more of an angle shot and less of profile. |
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03/16/2004 09:58:56 AM |
| Beatiful girl and fantastic shot! I saw a little problem in your composition, perhaps the violet element in her hair is a bit distracted. 7 |
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03/15/2004 07:50:30 PM |
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03/15/2004 07:15:35 PM |
| Pretty girl and the light is okay. I just have a need to see 'eyes' in these shots. I realized this is a profile, and that fine too. Not a bad entry and I hope you do well. |
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03/15/2004 01:41:06 PM |
| Could be improved with better lighting and maybe turning more towards the camera, a little unflattering for such a pretty girl. |
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03/15/2004 12:11:58 PM |
| This really conveys a mood. Great lighting and skin tones. My only suggestion would be to extend the image out a bit to the left - even if it's just negative/empty space. The way it is posed would suggest the composition needs some balance to the left of the woman's face. However, overall great shot. I hope you do well! |
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03/15/2004 10:47:39 AM |
| You should have had her turn her head to face the camera! |
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03/15/2004 04:55:22 AM |
| This is a very attractive portrait with nice gentle tones and it works well against the dark background. A crop to the bottom, up to the lower edge of the horizontal shadow, would make another good picture. |
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03/15/2004 01:19:47 AM |
| I don't think this is a flattering portrait pose. The focal point seems to be her ear! |
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