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03/21/2004 08:31:54 AM |
| soft and effective, charming |
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03/20/2004 10:06:40 PM |
| your background is out of place in the upper righthand corner |
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03/20/2004 03:18:46 AM |
| Does not look totally sharp (movement blur ?), needs some white balance correction. I would then crop closer, above the waist, take away some black away of the sides, and then you have a great portrait. |
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03/18/2004 09:29:56 AM |
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03/17/2004 11:23:49 PM |
| nice and casual...I like the pose and they look very comfortable...it looks like there is a slight yellow cast to the shot though |
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03/17/2004 04:53:23 PM |
| Young love, redux... this is a great use of lighting and framing to show a relationship. - 8 |
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03/16/2004 11:21:34 AM |
| Nicely done BOL Cropping just above the belt would have made it for me. Still a great shot. |
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03/16/2004 07:42:42 AM |
| Good pose, I like the soft expressions, but she seems to be looking up. I would like to see this cropped much tighter, take some of the sides and crop below the elbow. I like portraits to be just a little warm, this seems to be too warm, could be my monitor. :) |
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03/15/2004 10:56:28 PM |
| A very nice portrait I like the tones and positioning |
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03/15/2004 10:08:41 PM |
| nice intimate portrait. a bit too red and noisy in the skin tones. his cuff of his sleeve needs to be fixed. overall good. :) |
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03/15/2004 09:09:30 PM |
| Nicely composed, good color balance. I would have cropped more off the bottom of the picture. The only nit I have is that the female subject is looking just over my right shoulder, while the male model is looking right at me, and believe me this is nitpicking. Cute couple |
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03/15/2004 06:45:15 PM |
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03/15/2004 03:56:30 PM |
| good background work, but the warm cast is way over the top too much in my taste, face lighting is too harsh for "couples portraits", and a hair light would have helpped a great deal I feel. |
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03/15/2004 03:04:31 PM |
| I think I would of liked this cropped higher. Her belt shine move the eye down. Good shooting. |
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03/15/2004 01:39:25 PM |
| nice image and exposure, but lighting seems a bit flat. |
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03/15/2004 01:33:15 PM |
| lovely photo..good colors and well composed. Only suggestion would be to have cropped the bottom to cut off the jeans. |
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03/15/2004 12:57:57 PM |
| A sweet portrait that I'm sure the models will really like. Colour seems a little too orange to me. |
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03/15/2004 12:03:30 PM |
| I like the lighting and skin tones in this one. Also, I like the expression captured from both subjects - very serene. I'm also glad you had the subjects dress casual - to reflect their actual personalities - rather than their "posed" personalities. |
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03/15/2004 09:59:01 AM |
| There needs to be more separation from the backing. Otherwise, a very nice shot. |
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03/15/2004 09:20:15 AM |
| A very sympathetic double portrait - nice expresions from both subjects. The play of black on black works well, with just enough light to show up the black tops. Perhaps the white balance is a bit towards red but it makes for a very warm feeling. |
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03/15/2004 02:12:02 AM |
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03/15/2004 01:25:30 AM |
| I like the pose, but the lighting is really orange and I don't care for that. And I hope I don't offend, but a little powder on her nose would help. |
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03/15/2004 12:12:58 AM |
| Skin tones seem to be a little red. Did you shoot this under tungsten lighting? Hues or Curves might pull that out of the photo. |
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