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02/20/2008 05:45:21 AM |
I like the gradation in color/shading, from the white winged first bird, to the two grays, to the black behind. |
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02/19/2008 09:47:24 AM |
A beautiful scene, but the background doesn't illustrate much movement. |
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02/19/2008 01:21:42 AM |
This is cool, and I know that it is very hard to get birds while they are in flight. You definity have to pan them. I think the image would have worked better if you could have added the panning in with a slower shutter speed. |
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02/18/2008 08:58:21 AM |
The birds are just not sharp enough for me and the panning effect isn't particularly evident in the sky. |
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02/16/2008 09:06:04 AM |
It looks like you just looked up and went click, and was like "This looks nice!" |
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02/16/2008 06:36:48 AM |
The panning effect is too subtle for me. Try a longer shutter to accentuate the feeling of motion. It would also help to have something in the background that shows motion better than clouds. |
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02/15/2008 09:21:24 PM |
need more contrast between subject and background |
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02/15/2008 03:13:52 AM |
Because of the uniform background there is no indication of motion from the background. The birds show a little bit of motion but that could also be from just being out of focus. |
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02/14/2008 11:08:21 AM |
to me, this challenge was about conveying the sense of motion. you've succeeded in capturing the birds, but I don't feel any motion at all. capturing a background where the motion was evident would've helped. |
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02/13/2008 08:11:40 PM |
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