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03/25/2004 02:28:42 PM |
I agree with the advise to open up some shoulders but otherwise - very good!
Message edited by HBunch - Critique Club status removed. |
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03/21/2004 02:15:33 AM |
| Do they really smile like this? |
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03/20/2004 04:27:06 PM |
| Wow look at all them teeth. 8 |
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03/20/2004 03:41:47 AM |
| Great expression, really expression joy, love, close relationship. Only small improvement could be some catchlights in the eyes. |
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03/19/2004 09:22:25 PM |
| What a sweet photo. You can feel the love coming through the photo. Nice personal crop. The only thing that could be touched up is their skin - it looks a bit reddish. Also his teeth could be whitened, since they are quite exposed (simple dodging). Good keepsake for sure. |
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03/19/2004 07:29:27 PM |
| Could be an ad for toothpaste :) Very good exposure (9) |
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03/19/2004 11:20:47 AM |
| They look great together : ) !!! |
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03/18/2004 08:50:47 AM |
| Nice tight cropping. Good expressions though the girl is a bit sfter than the boy. |
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03/17/2004 01:24:12 PM |
| Beautiful smiles. Great teeth! |
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03/16/2004 07:31:03 PM |
| Good choice of models. God composition and effective use of DOF. Portrait let down though by impression that he is in sharper focus than her - with a narrow DOF both models need to be safely within the shallow focus plane. |
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03/16/2004 04:10:23 PM |
| Great smiles and capture..... |
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03/16/2004 09:23:38 AM |
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03/15/2004 09:34:24 PM |
| nicely cropped, i like the blurred background also on the right side...gave you 9 for this... |
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03/15/2004 07:34:35 PM |
| The skin tones and lighting on this one are pitch perfect. I think it's a great composition. My only suggestion would be to show a tiny (and I mean tiny) bit of the shoulders/arms - just because it would add to the fact that these two are also showing a bit of affection. I love the smiles and expressions. Overall, this is an excellent image and I'm sure you're going to do really well in this challenge. |
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03/15/2004 01:37:51 PM |
| I love the emotion in this shot. You can't help but feel happy looking at these two. Very nice capture! |
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03/15/2004 12:22:23 PM |
| I really, really like this shot. The large, beautiful smiles make it. An a cute couple they are. Coupple of personal preferences: Yhe teeth on the young man needed to be brightened, hers somewhat. Left side should be burned in some more. While her hair isnatural and casual it is a little too disheveled. Despite these observations you still got a good rating from me. |
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03/15/2004 10:55:11 AM |
| What a heart-warming couple! |
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03/15/2004 10:50:49 AM |
| Darling couple, relaxed, happy pose. I like this one. |
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03/15/2004 07:11:01 AM |
| Great synchronised smiles, gently lit, all in focus, a nice capture of an attractive couple who could make you belive the title. |
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03/15/2004 01:27:36 AM |
| Nice blurred background. Huge smiles, but it's a nice photo of the couple. |
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03/15/2004 12:26:52 AM |
| nicely done photo...colors and composition are very nice...you captured a moment very well...the smiles look genuine, not faked |
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