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02/19/2008 09:16:13 PM |
I feel that this could benifit if the second peice of bread where in focus as it seems to be the main focal piece in the picture. |
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02/18/2008 10:26:31 PM |
I think just touch more contrast could help this one. Overall not bad. |
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02/15/2008 11:02:29 PM |
Nice colors and textures, but more DOF is needed. |
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02/14/2008 10:04:21 PM |
I like the DOF but think it would look better with the focal point being on the left most slice of bread. |
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02/14/2008 09:43:38 PM |
This is a really cool perspective of the bread. but the blue in the back? |
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02/14/2008 09:36:59 PM |
Wondering if your focus had have been more on the front slice, it may have been a little better composition wise??? |
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02/14/2008 06:16:53 AM |
The focus here is on the wrong slice - our eyes are drawn to the slice in the middle of the frame, but it's OOF. A pity as the composition and lighting looks strong. |
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02/14/2008 04:20:18 AM |
Humm, nice composition.. your focus is the only thing that bugs me. I would have brought it in a little bit. |
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02/13/2008 09:00:54 PM |
The colors are really desaturated and the bread would have benefited from side lighting. i |
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02/13/2008 05:56:19 PM |
I feel you missed the focus here |
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