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Agouti Gerbil
Agouti Gerbil
kashi


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Challenge: Pet Portrait III (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D50
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Location: Inside my end table
Date: Feb 18, 2008
Aperture: f3.2
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Animals
Date Uploaded: Feb 18, 2008

One of our pet gerbils - known as "Burbel Brown".
Best guess is that he is a golden agouti gerbil.

I put a couple of his toys into one of our end-tables (which are octagon shaped, with doors), and brought him over, snapping away as he played.

Statistics
Place: 203 out of 261
Avg (all users): 5.2132
Avg (commenters): 5.6000
Avg (participants): 4.9524
Avg (non-participants): 5.5109
Views since voting: 1370
Views during voting: 320
Votes: 197
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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03/07/2008 11:19:42 PM
From the Critique Club:

Great photo. Beautiful tones and colors. Nicely in focus. And a surprise to see such a small creature so up close.

Darkness. My very first impression was that it was too dark. I think boosting the levels - selectively if necessary to preserve the black background - would have helped your score quite a bit. There is allot of beautiful tone and texture in the brown fur and whiskers and boosting the levels would allow these to 'pop'.

Composition. That big black eyeball is great. But it is almost centered. A different crop that put that eye on the thirds line would make this stronger. Probably cropping from the top and cropping from the left so you preserve those great whiskers. If you could get those whiskers to really jump out, you would have a very strong photo.

alexzen

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03/06/2008 02:51:11 PM
I love lighting for animals that makes sense. This is a case that works as most little critters are noctural. Good focus and detail.
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03/03/2008 12:41:02 PM
A sweet shot of this little guy! And here I didn't even notice the title error - I thought there was such a thing as a Agouti Gebril and that it was Italian or something.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/29/2008 03:01:28 AM
How nice to see one of our rodent friends. Pocket Pets Rule! Pretty little thing; nice textures, good clarity. I think the Sharpen filter would have brought out the highlights in the fur a little more.
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02/27/2008 05:20:00 PM
Almost too dark, but I still like it.
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02/27/2008 09:53:35 AM
Ohhhhwuh! How CUTE! I love his little hands. He's posing so sweetly for you. Technicals are beautiful too :)
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02/26/2008 12:04:44 PM
Excellently composed and executed. VERY well done. IMHO the subtlties and quality of this are absolutely perfect. 9
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02/25/2008 11:15:37 PM
very nice close up
it's a bit dark, would love to see it lightened a bit
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02/25/2008 12:31:45 AM
(did you mean gerbil?) hee hee

What a sweetie. Love the catch lights.
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