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02/26/2008 11:03:58 PM |
Very nice. A true portrait. Posthumous Red Ribbon.
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02/25/2008 03:12:31 PM |
| Might have been better with a different angle or with less headroom. I like the idea and gentle side lighting. |
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02/25/2008 11:07:45 AM |
| i really like the angle that you have gone for here, the close crop and the blur work wonderfully to go with the sharp crisp details of her face, well done 9 |
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02/24/2008 07:22:02 PM |
| Cool. It'd be better with the wall in the top right cropped out. |
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02/24/2008 04:40:35 PM |
Very nice composition and I like the depth of field that you have used together with the gentle black and white conversion
The curtains are a little busy and distracting, but if you were going to use these as a backdrop it might have been slightly better if you had cropped down a little to lose the point where the curtains and the ceiling meet
Just a couple of thoughts for what they are worth |
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02/24/2008 09:56:16 AM |
| I like the idea of this shot, but the backgroud isn't quite right. Cropping out the top so you don't see the top of the curtains would help and would also focus attention towards the face/pose. |
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02/23/2008 03:38:43 PM |
| I like the DOF here. I think lighting could have been better to give more contrast to the subject. |
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02/22/2008 08:22:40 PM |
| The large blurred section in the foreground doesn't work here I think. Blurring large objects in the foreground is really hard to pull off though. I like your concept, but compositionally it could be a lot stronger from either closer in or further away I think |
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02/22/2008 07:03:27 PM |
the hand looks deformed with the fact that its cut off and so blurry
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02/21/2008 10:14:59 AM |
| Cutting off the fingers at the joints just makes this not work for me. I like her face and the light. |
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02/20/2008 10:10:20 PM |
| I do think that the expression on your model's face conveys the sense of peace attained through the practice of yoga. Unfortunately, I'm distracted from the face by both the background (especially the gray triangle at the upper right) and the large OOF hand in the foreground. I think the image would be much better with much closer cropping around the model. |
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02/20/2008 08:43:33 PM |
| i wish the fingertips were included, it would give you a stronger image |
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02/20/2008 01:32:14 PM |
| Really great capture - would love for the top of the curtains to have been cropped though. |
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02/20/2008 10:29:26 AM |
| Nice image. I might have cropped this to square; the upper right corner is a tad distracting to me. |
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