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Challenge: Free Study 2008-02 (Advanced Editing VII) Camera: Pentax K10D Lens: Pentax DA 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 AF Location: Nevil Tires (showroom,) Statesboro, GA Date: Feb 25, 2008 Aperture: F/5.6 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/30 Galleries: Snapshot, Children Date Uploaded: Feb 28, 2008
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Cropped, triple bordered thin in black & pink, Curves, Contrast/Highlights, Hue/Saturation, Burn Tool (Low Opacity,) Clone Tool, Spot Healing Tool, Blur Tool, Opacity Changes, Blending Changes (including Pin Light, Screen, Luminosity,) Deep Blue Filter, Guassian Blur, Sharpened Edges, USM, Resized, Saved for Web... |
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03/11/2008 01:39:53 PM |
Over all a nice shot. A few observations:
- A 3/4 pose of the subject would be better with side lighting.
- Elevated angle shooting down at subject would have been more flattering (no double chin)
- The triple bordering detracts from the purpose of the image.
- The title does not match the action/activity of the subject. "Thoughtful" would be more fitting. |
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03/06/2008 03:05:11 PM |
The borders are a bit distracting to me. They aren't consistent in width. I would play around a bit more with that to see if you can make it work. Maybe if there were one border inside the picture to act as a pseudo frame? |
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03/06/2008 11:51:29 AM |
A little too much done to the eyes. |
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03/04/2008 03:20:38 PM |
The border is interesting but distracting. My eyes spent more time on the border than on the portrait. |
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03/03/2008 03:39:03 PM |
The treatment you gave to her eyes is too obvious, it doesn't pair well with the lighting of the image. That's a very creative border but a bit overkill.
She has a nice smile, very innocent :) |
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03/03/2008 02:56:04 PM |
Your frame will probably not be appreciated by some of the voters. Your subjects eyes are lovely! |
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03/01/2008 12:37:37 PM |
Photo is fine. well composed, captures and processed. The border distracts. |
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03/01/2008 12:35:36 AM |
i'm not liking the border thing going on here |
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