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03/25/2008 07:01:56 PM |
Originally posted by kmtregoe:
cropping the right side of the page would have created a stronger image |
Yeah, I think I was just being stupid while editing. I love how the smoke turned out in the photo, so I really didn't want to crop out any of the smoke, whatsoever. Like I said, I was being stupid and stubborn. |
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03/18/2008 11:57:39 PM |
| If there was a way to compose this shot without the power lines, it would have made this a better picture. Like the B&W for these smokestack shots. |
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03/18/2008 05:51:27 AM |
| Wow! Powerful and nicely done! |
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03/17/2008 10:25:59 AM |
| the sharpness of your photo makes it stand out |
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03/16/2008 09:32:44 PM |
| Needs straightening and a bit of work on the tonal range. But otherwise the composition is nice. |
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03/16/2008 07:11:25 PM |
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03/16/2008 12:58:58 AM |
| Kind of ironic to me to see the pollution just billowing out and yet an American flag proudly being displayed alongside... (hey, I just read the title - who says I'm a little slow?) |
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03/15/2008 10:52:05 AM |
| I think you should have straightened the image to get rid of the tilt.. that's the first thing I noticed instead of the actual image.. The upper half is interesting.. the combination of the smoke and the wires are very appropriate for the challenge.. The lower half is just in the middle of being a silhouette and then not..not sure it looks that great.. I do like how the flag is instatntly recognisable |
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03/14/2008 09:26:01 AM |
| this meets the challenge really well |
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03/14/2008 09:24:39 AM |
| Nice shot. The angle seems a little askew though. Maybe crop it bit more. |
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03/14/2008 09:23:08 AM |
| I like how the smoke is gathering together at the top of the picture, I also like how there is an american flag in this shot as well, nice capture. |
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03/14/2008 09:12:49 AM |
| would like to see more detail on the buildings. |
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03/13/2008 10:43:39 AM |
| Very nice composition. Too bad you couldn't do anything with the power lines. Good b&w conversion. |
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03/13/2008 09:41:32 AM |
| Good shot and i like the color tone and the smoke looks really good |
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03/13/2008 09:38:27 AM |
| too many people are taking pictures of smokestacks. i know you were trying to clearly see the flag in the shot to matcht he title, but i think it would have been nicer to see more of the factory. |
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03/13/2008 05:10:32 AM |
| A great idea, I like the power of the B&W but the power lines are little distracting unfortunatley. |
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03/12/2008 11:21:12 PM |
| The B/W works well but the image is let down with those wires going across it. |
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03/12/2008 09:47:16 PM |
| cropping the right side of the page would have created a stronger image |
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03/12/2008 02:46:58 PM |
| I wish this were leveled up clockwise a smidge. Good BW image... perfect pollution. |
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03/12/2008 10:58:25 AM |
| this is a really good picture, and i agree with the title. |
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03/12/2008 06:46:36 AM |
| Good industrial feel and the consequences thereof. Leaning left, would have straightened up the verticals |
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