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Mission Bay
Mission Bay
jnenvir


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Challenge: Fences II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L USM
Location: San Diego, CA
Date: Mar 17, 2008
Aperture: 9.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Abstract, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Mar 17, 2008

Stainless steel fencing along walkway near ocean.

Note: converted to b/w with channel mi er. I think that is ok, if not please let me know. The original is essentially black and white.

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Place: 90 out of 251
Avg (all users): 5.5609
Avg (commenters): 6.2500
Avg (participants): 5.5217
Avg (non-participants): 5.5870
Views since voting: 708
Views during voting: 317
Votes: 230
Comments: 8
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/25/2008 09:09:29 PM
Needs a little more contrast for impact. Maybe a little too tall and stretched out.
03/25/2008 06:33:07 PM
I like the long leading lines and the repeating ellipses along the diagonal.
Might be nicer cropped down a bit on the top and just a little on the left. This would simplify the image and make it stronger in my opinion. Still very nice.
03/25/2008 10:26:35 AM
Nice image. There seems to be some dust or something on your lense or filter bottom right.
03/22/2008 09:59:24 PM
Excellent composition and lighting! 10.
03/21/2008 10:45:37 AM
Very nice, however, I think it would have been better cropped in from the left. As it is, I'm not fond of the large expanse of white. (I haven't decided if I like the lack of detail in the white or not as it makes the image very graphical as it is.)
03/21/2008 05:29:07 AM
I feel you might have been better cropping off a little of the empty space
03/20/2008 06:31:52 PM
Great angle. Very contemporary feeling. I would have cropped out the top background bit to where the walkway starts to curve for a total geometric/abstract feeling to this. Then I would have pumped the contrast up a notch. But that's me. Really like it though.
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03/19/2008 06:21:05 AM
A tighter crop would improve this a great deal - remove the top of the fence and the fence on the left completely so we're just left with the main fence and shadows.
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