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03/30/2004 10:56:03 PM |
| Too washed out. The black edging of the tile draws your eye more than the orange and the figure in the back doesn't seem to serve any purpose. The reflection doesn't bother me and I like the offset of both the container and the figure in the back, however could you make the distance between the containers even? Perhaps even not influde the sides of the window as a frame, unless you are going to on the top as well, the picture is contained, but then released all up there. Score: 4 |
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03/29/2004 11:25:57 AM |
| i find my attention is grabbed by the stick man before i see the orange |
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03/27/2004 11:07:44 AM |
| The coloring of the photo could use some work... too blue. Also the horizon line is tilted a bit. |
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03/26/2004 10:18:46 PM |
| good picture, nice use of the theme, i would have removed the figures on the back wall to draw the eye to the orange |
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03/26/2004 01:20:10 PM |
| This is great. Lots of visual elements here. I find the figures on the wall stealing the limelight from the orange subject. In fact my eyes focus on the figures rather than the bottles. Perhaps taking this at a shallower DOF at a larger aperture (to blur the background a little bit) would do the trick. Nevertheless, it shows that you really put a lot of effort for the challenge and your results are quite beautiful. |
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03/26/2004 01:30:20 AM |
| Linda foto, pero me parece que el muñeco llama más la atención qeu lo naranja del frasco. |
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03/25/2004 12:18:36 PM |
| The tiles and the stuff in the window distracts from the composition and the color. |
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03/25/2004 01:44:33 AM |
| seems very flat. increasing the contrast in photoshop would help |
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03/24/2004 08:18:29 AM |
| Cool idea - I like how the orange stands out here |
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