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04/06/2008 12:03:26 AM |
| Brilliant! I love it. Very cinematic. It really tells about the moment. I feel like I know them well just from the image. Nicely done. |
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04/01/2008 09:34:54 PM |
| the crop on this is a little to tight for me... |
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03/31/2008 12:57:41 PM |
| is that the boss?? career is over |
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03/30/2008 07:53:05 PM |
| I really like your concept here. I find the expressions on both subjects to be very natural and evocative of "Intimacy". I would prefer a tighter crop on the faces and to see the tops pf their heads. |
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03/29/2008 08:56:06 PM |
| Nice, but a little underexposed. |
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03/29/2008 10:25:45 AM |
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03/29/2008 05:29:29 AM |
| I really like this one. You've given us a glimpse of a private and meaningful moment. BTW - it's hard to tell from the limited resolution image, but it looks like the guitar is strung for a right-handed player (conventionally, the thicker strings are on top). |
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03/28/2008 05:42:18 PM |
| I wish we could see all of their heads... and their faces were as lightly lit as the guitar. As it is, my eye goes right to the guitar and I have to pull it away to try to explore the rest of the image. Good feeling photo... just would benefit with better lighting and composition, I think. |
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03/28/2008 08:52:23 AM |
| This meets the challenge well. The crop works well though I think this could have used a bit more light on thei faces. |
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03/27/2008 07:44:27 PM |
| strong sense of capturing an intimate moment. well done. the crop seems a little cramped, though. |
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03/27/2008 02:53:59 PM |
| I could see this up in my room poster-size, great capture of intimacy. Only improvements I could see would be either more or less motion blur on the hands, no flash reflection on the bottom of the guitar, or a little extra space on the left so that the end of the guitar isn't "kissing" the edge of the frame. One of my favorites. |
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03/26/2008 10:59:54 PM |
| A little to dark for me but it's a great idea. |
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03/26/2008 09:47:57 PM |
| harry Chapin, himself! Excellent. |
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03/26/2008 06:25:57 PM |
| Nice, I liked the moving fingers |
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03/26/2008 05:29:42 PM |
| A nice moment, but you lost the tops of their heads and the focus is off |
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03/26/2008 11:04:57 AM |
| Nice sense movement on the hands. Intersting shadow on the wall. Cut off heads always bothers me, but i think that is me, not a rule. |
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03/26/2008 05:55:46 AM |
| Very rare that you would teach someone to play guitar left-handed. |
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