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03/31/2008 12:51:02 PM |
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03/31/2008 02:27:51 AM |
| As a whole, the photograph is very appealing. I like the expression and the mood is certainly intimate. My only criticisms, if I may, are: the overexposure on the right back of the model draws away the viewers attention and the two fingers of the left hand peeking up from the crop are distracting. As a side note, a red bra could have driven the message home a bit more. |
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03/30/2008 08:57:15 PM |
| Nice. I like how the reflection is framed and creates the composition. |
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03/29/2008 09:27:12 PM |
| Great concept for the challenge. The positioning of the lipstick is just a bit too staged and stiff. Despite the effectice furnishings, this is almost too noticeably done in a studio. Perhaps a tighter crop would have helped? |
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03/29/2008 11:47:53 AM |
| Pretty... but seems so contrived. I don't know... Something just doesn't work for me in it. I do like the splash of red and of blue. |
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03/28/2008 06:26:00 PM |
| great lighting; the complete gray wall, it disturbs me, it gives the image an artificial look |
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03/27/2008 11:35:16 AM |
| Nicely done, composition is excellent. |
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03/26/2008 11:13:00 PM |
| Good image over all but challenge wise I'm not so sure. 6 |
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03/26/2008 09:33:04 AM |
| I would've liked to see a wider version of this shot. Here her top looks like a plain 'ol top, given the title & challenge theme I think lip that red should be paired with a not plain top. But with this crop, I cannot tell. Also would've liked to see some light on the right side of her face. |
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03/26/2008 01:24:01 AM |
| Beautiful composition, lighting and processing. |
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03/26/2008 12:57:57 AM |
| The image doesn't really imply intimacy to me. But your title at least hints that intimacy may soon be coming. I *do* like the lighting, the colors and composition. |
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