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05/06/2008 10:41:39 PM |
Nice composition. The cucumbers and pickles work great on the bottom. The onions at the top flow nicely with the tomatoes. |
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05/05/2008 10:20:13 PM |
This photograph has nice highlihgts but the cucumbers have a little too much shine to them. The way the vegatables fill the photo is good too. |
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05/05/2008 12:03:33 PM |
Certainly some healthy food there. :-) Lighting is a bit harsh. Try using a reflector (white poster board works well) to get fill light and eliminate the glare. The big piece of lettuce in the upper right is overwhelming the image. All JMO of course. :-D Good luck in the challenge. |
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05/05/2008 12:31:58 AM |
Nice composition. Work on the hotspots in the lighting on the tomatoes. |
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05/04/2008 03:06:24 PM |
I like the detail that you captured. But the lettuce could have used more lighting. |
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05/04/2008 08:23:00 AM |
this is perfect for the challenge and nice contrasting colors |
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05/03/2008 11:00:35 AM |
I like how the tomatos were shined. |
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05/02/2008 05:33:08 PM |
the overall sharpness of your image really makes it stand out |
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05/02/2008 03:23:13 PM |
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05/01/2008 07:53:14 PM |
I like the colors of the tomatoes. The lettuce could be a bit greener. I'd like to see more of the white onions? in the corner. I like the sheen on the cucumbers. All in all I think the arrangement could have been a bit better, while the colors, especially of the tomatoes and cucumbers, are pretty good. |
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05/01/2008 09:31:22 AM |
maybe a little too close. i would try to get more of some of the other foods in there |
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04/30/2008 08:36:00 AM |
works for me, but lighting is a bit harsh, green could need a tad more saturation. |
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04/30/2008 07:54:27 AM |
The flash is reflecting off the cucumber a little harshly. Diffusing the light a little more would help this picture. The lettuce does not seem as crisp as it could be |
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04/30/2008 02:04:25 AM |
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04/30/2008 01:09:27 AM |
And simply the composition works alternative light source to the camera flash would work even better. |
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