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05/05/2008 12:32:13 PM |
| More B&W then sepia to me. |
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05/04/2008 04:03:58 PM |
| She should know better than jumping on the bed:) The lighting for the shot just does not do her justice, A little more lighting on the face would be nice and getting rid of the shadows behind her head by adding background light to light the wall behind her may have helped. |
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05/01/2008 09:04:20 PM |
| Great idea, but the shadows are distracting. |
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04/30/2008 05:09:22 PM |
| You need better lighting for this. More fill flash. The shadow in the wall is very harsh, and there is no detail in her face. Also I dont like the angle. |
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04/30/2008 03:51:39 PM |
| Harsh lighting (shadow on bed and wall) but the subject's face is not very well lit. |
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04/30/2008 01:56:02 PM |
| Too dark....you lose alot of details int he face. You should light up at her face to fill in the shadows. |
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04/30/2008 06:48:40 AM |
| I love the concept and the contrast. I wish the face had a little more light to see more of the expression. |
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04/30/2008 04:23:28 AM |
| The lighting was poorly aimed resulting in some undesirable shadows. As for the composition, it would have been better to follow the rule of thirds here, instead of centering the model. Some fill light would have lit up the face better and showed more expression. |
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