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First off, I love the tight composition of this. While the tower thingy in the background is a bit distracting, in one sense (and it would make a really cool picture without at), in another sense, it adds to the shot by contrasting old/traditional with more modern.
Technically, the focus, exposure, etc. is good. I think the biggest thing noticeable to me is that it seems to be gray overall. It needs some more distinct white/light areas, I think. Admittedly, I am not sure how or where, unless in the conversion process you could get the whitish area on the right a bit brighter.
Overall, a nice shot. It is very graphic and clean.
Best to you in future challenges.