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05/27/2008 02:01:08 PM |
Nice muted colours and interesting dappling. I think this might be better if the subject's face was lit better though... |
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05/27/2008 09:25:49 AM |
i think the girl is a little out of place |
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05/26/2008 08:13:48 PM |
Nice light captured on the hay. |
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05/24/2008 05:08:16 PM |
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05/23/2008 10:23:50 PM |
Harsh lighting and your subject is in the shadows. Good idea though. |
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05/23/2008 11:02:47 AM |
I like the layout of this shot. That said, your model gets a bit lost as a background object. She's small, in...well the background, and the slivers of light really draw your attention. Perhaps having a light on your model might have given her more "importance" in the scene? |
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05/23/2008 09:38:05 AM |
I actuallt think this would have been better without the model. |
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05/23/2008 04:32:45 AM |
Very high contrast. Almost dutone. I like the way you used this wooden construction. |
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05/22/2008 07:13:16 PM |
Bored teenager living on a farm? Really, really nice picture - but what's the story? Detail in the straw is fantastic with not too much contrast. Did you use fill-in flash? I really like how some of the straw seems to be metallic and reflective. |
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05/22/2008 08:59:03 AM |
artistist way to catch dappled light, nice job |
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05/22/2008 01:52:59 AM |
Your model could have taken up more of the frame and had she been placed IN the light I think this would have been a more interesting shot. The way it is right now its a picture of a barn interior with a girl in it. |
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05/21/2008 08:59:30 PM |
Barns are dangerous places for young girls,...without a boyfriend! |
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05/21/2008 02:41:02 PM |
Harsh light (in very difficult condition, graphically interesting, your model is a little lost in the composition and was probably better placed on right side and more in the foreground. |
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