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06/06/2008 07:16:01 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club -
Well you almost nailed the brown. I wont make this long as it looks like I will just be repeating most of what your other comments state.
You met the challenge for sure, but the technical issues really over power that. The blurry issue is just a really strong problem. Odds are this was handheld with a long shutter speed (long for hand held) and that ends up being all I think about when looking at the shot.
I do think you have a cool "model" here though. A wide angle lens (or standing further back) to allow the whole boat to be in the shot, and shooting on a tripod to allow a sharper shot would have served you much better here.
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05/31/2008 04:36:08 AM |
| The composition is OK for this - looks to be a display in a town center somewhere? Also looks to have been handheld at low shutter creating some motion blur which takes away from the impact. I don't always carry a tripod either, but what you can do is find an immovable object - a bench or a pillar or something - and use the self-timer function to take the shot. |
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05/31/2008 02:14:57 AM |
| Nice subject, poor execution - too blurry |
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05/30/2008 10:53:19 PM |
| Looks like you have some blur from a slow shutter speed. I'm afraid that hurts it quite a bit. |
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05/29/2008 03:44:43 PM |
| The photo seems to be out of focus |
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05/29/2008 02:37:50 PM |
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05/29/2008 01:01:41 AM |
| It looks like a tripod would have come in handy in the low light :) |
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05/29/2008 12:24:52 AM |
| Is that in a parking lot? Seems soft can't tell if it is the focus or camera shake. |
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05/28/2008 02:33:59 PM |
| It looks like some camera shake is hurting this one a bit. |
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05/28/2008 01:10:23 PM |
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05/28/2008 12:11:15 PM |
| Image seems to be blured to me. Perhaps camera shake?? Maybe mirror lock up may have helped if you were using a SLR camera and on a tripod. |
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05/27/2008 05:20:15 PM |
| I'm a little confused by the obvious immobility of the ship and the motion blur of the shot. Just don't think that works for me. |
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05/27/2008 04:44:49 AM |
| Nice angle...has come out a bit blurred though. |
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05/26/2008 09:16:54 PM |
| Love the majesty of the ship but really seems out of focus. |
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05/26/2008 09:06:14 PM |
| You should have used a tripod. Too much info in the title. |
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05/26/2008 08:11:07 PM |
| Looks OOF to me... had this been crisp it would have been pretty good. |
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05/26/2008 05:40:07 PM |
| Cool ship, but a little OOF. |
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05/26/2008 02:57:29 PM |
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05/26/2008 11:29:55 AM |
| Hey, I lived next door to that :-) Right up on Hugo Street (what Harbor Drive is after it crosses Rosecrans) |
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05/26/2008 10:36:55 AM |
| Too blurry, looks like camera shake rather than focus issues... |
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05/26/2008 05:34:47 AM |
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05/26/2008 02:25:53 AM |
| this would be a really great shot if it was clear - did you use a tripod? |
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