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06/02/2008 01:19:31 PM |
| The dark - light progression is good, but the glare (and dirtiness of the glass)to the right of her face impedes the soft flow of the image. Realizing this is a basic editing challenge this is well done. This captures the sadness of saying goodbye very well - as though the darkness will overtake her as the train proceeds from the station. |
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06/01/2008 02:58:07 PM |
| Nice sombre moody shot. B&W suits it well. |
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05/30/2008 11:19:35 PM |
| She looks very pretty, you will score better with a title. |
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05/30/2008 10:37:36 PM |
| How about: "Longing" She appears to be either longing to be out participating in, or hiding from whatever she is looking at. Very nice window lighting. |
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05/29/2008 12:37:33 AM |
| Very creative lighting. I would have like to have seen just a bit more face. |
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05/28/2008 01:32:42 PM |
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05/28/2008 11:36:34 AM |
| You have articulated a sense of yearning, of wistfulness perhaps, well. There is a hint of narrative, but also a degree of ambiguity which I like. In terms of the technicals, I feel this could be stronger: perhaps a little of the eye visible, and a slightly different arrangement of the hair (I find the peice behind her open mouth rather distracting). The photo overall hasa rather flat feeling; whether greater sharpness or different lighting would help I am unsure. |
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05/28/2008 04:08:27 AM |
| Classic shot, but would like to see at least one of her eyes... |
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