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08/03/2008 08:08:15 AM |
| I like the color and composition. Bird is a bit OOF |
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06/24/2008 08:44:05 AM |
| I like the closer to a square crop better than the original. It makes the viewer focus more on the bird's silhouette. Love the golden glow of the beach and the waves but they engulfed the main subject in the original. In the After image those two elements act more complementary to the main subject now. In the original I found that the cresting wave at the top third of the picture was too distracting - the golden gleam at the crest of the wave and the deep shadow at the bottom acted like a dividing line drawing far too much attention away from the dividing line of the water and the beach and thus attention away from the main subject that stands just below it. In the after image you removed that 'double' dividing line. Now there is just one division between land and sea. |
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06/07/2008 06:01:39 PM |
| i really really like your original crop .. i love the way the bird and its shadow form a path up to that beautiful reflected sun, or moon, i'm not sure which !! .. the colours are absolutely amazing .. its the most excellent photograph .. :) |
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06/07/2008 02:53:38 PM |
| I like the warmed gold of the tones and am appreciative of the newly silhouetted bird and his shadow. |
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06/07/2008 11:02:14 AM |
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