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Challenge: A Single Line (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-30D
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: Florida
Date: Jun 22, 2008
Aperture: 14
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/60th
Galleries: Still Life, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jun 22, 2008

 Taken with a strip of film placed on a white foam core

WB and Color desaturation in LR

Levels and Crop in PS

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Place: 47 out of 142
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 07/04/2008 05:19:32 PM
Critique Club Review:

Color Saturation and Hue: N/A (image is monochrome)

Brightness and contrast: Brights are not overly bright. Darks could be a little darker. Nice inky blacks would have worked well here. I do like the shadows on the foam core, it gives dimension to the piece.

Focus and depth of field: Focus is good, depth of field is a little shallow. The foregound and background both go a little soft. I see your fstop was at 14, I don't know how much more you had left. Perhaps a little greater distance from the subject could have helped increase the depth of field. As this image comes across as an abstract shape, with no real beginning or end, I think that the depth of field is a little more critical here.

A nice interesting take on the challenge. Turning the spiral into your "line" worked very well.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/24/2008 10:00:59 AM
Excellent subject and nice curves to your line. I might have preferred more DOF so it was sharp inthe foreground, but that's a relative nit.
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 06/23/2008 09:53:32 PM
WHAT IS THAT??? Just kidding it's simple and great. I just dont like these tall portrats in "advanced editing" I cant view all the pic at once.
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 06/23/2008 04:15:04 PM
Nice idea and good composition. Framing works too - 7
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 06/23/2008 02:58:50 PM
Love this one.. great idea.. nicely done
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