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Unable to Occupy
Unable to Occupy
amyleigh


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Challenge: Window View (Advanced Editing I)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 8700
Location: Albuquerque, New Mexico
Date: Apr 11, 2004
Aperture: f/3.7; 17.8 mm
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Urban
Date Uploaded: Apr 11, 2004

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Place: 116 out of 135
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Views since voting: 729
Votes: 175
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04/22/2004 10:34:46 PM
Hello from the Critique Club.

I am having some trouble trying to figure out what your shot is supposed to be. It looks like maybe the opening from the back of a building looking to the inside and a door at the other end with the sign? The sign is very hard to read.

The black and white seems to work well with the metals and textures of the shot. I'm not sure I would have left the portion on the left visable (is it a reflection?) It doesn't seem to add anything to the composition and it detracts from the main focus, in my opinion.

Overall, I think the difficulty in figuring out the subject and straining to read the sign take away from the interest of the shot. Since the sign is hard to read anyway, perhaps pulling back a little to get the perspective from a bit of a distance might help.

I like the fact that it is different from other window shots.

I hope this is helpful and good luck in the challenges!
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/16/2004 09:29:03 PM
Can't really tell what this is...
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04/16/2004 01:05:28 AM
Composition keeps me interested in this..... a few points off for some grit, never the less amoung the better b&w in this challenge.
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04/12/2004 11:02:40 PM
i really like this composition. it has a nice field layout. not too cluttered, not overly textured...
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04/12/2004 08:37:17 PM
Aluminum adds a cold feel to it...I like it.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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