Not framed in landscape, and not a landscape by traditional thought.
A way too busy snapshot of a crowd of people, all wearing hats of similar make.
You're not letting me care, what am I supposed to look at? The only thing that stands out is the 'Rendezvous' sign.
I guess I see the coincidence on the sign, and the crowd, but then, why didn't you title the image to help me know what's on your mind?
Your tonal value is just ok, the whites are there, barely, but your blacks seem to dip into the abyss.
A shoehorn like this is way too obvious, and won't make any big marks in a DPC contest.
Good luck. |