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07/24/2008 01:23:28 PM |
I didn't vote in this challenge but for me, the model has no connection with the drink and dominates the image instead of the drink. With that in mind, her eyes and face lead me to the right side of the image, away from the drink. I'm also not sold on the lighting, as it highlights neither the model or the drink. I would have scored this a 5 with a possible bump to a 6 depending on the strength of the other entries. Your score seems to reflect this range.
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07/24/2008 12:58:01 PM |
I gave you a six becuase I loved the clarity and the colors. The reason for me it didn't score higher was really by no fault of yours. To me the model looked bored and not arroused. Since the title is Oral sex on the beach, because that's the name of the drink she should be slightly arroused or have a mysterious smile to make the viewer wonder what she's been up to. |
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07/23/2008 11:52:26 PM |
I like that there is a person in your picture with the drink. Looks delicious, love the colors. |
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07/23/2008 01:22:11 PM |
I wonder if the title of the drink hurt you because of so many straight laced folks around here. Honestly, I love it when I hold my hand up and crop out the drink and her hand - just a cool portrait on its own. :~) |
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07/23/2008 08:43:15 AM |
Originally posted by JessWest: This shot is really well done, all those super-low scores are definitely about the title, not the shot. People apparently forget this isn't Disney Land. |
I'm afraid that might be true which is really deeply disappointing, since the title is the name of the drink.
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07/23/2008 04:10:45 AM |
This shot is really well done, all those super-low scores are definitely about the title, not the shot. People apparently forget this isn't Disney Land. |
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07/23/2008 12:29:00 AM |
Originally posted by ddreamer: Nice colors, but the face is a little bit to much to the left.
The top of the noose may never pass the line of the cheak. |
He probably meant tip, not top. Never heard of that "rule" though. Besides, bearing in mind the title, her nose is not so important :-).
Nice shot Ches!!
Message edited by author 2008-07-23 00:29:52. |
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07/23/2008 12:22:24 AM |
I don't get the noose comment. I think it is well done. I love the lighting and I think it's pretty cool that her nails match the color scheme lol. I think you got some great comments and they obviously loved it! |
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07/22/2008 11:32:23 PM |
Great colors and clarity, nice job, 7. |
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07/22/2008 06:35:45 PM |
Provocative. Well composed, the red lipstick give a nice point of contrast. |
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07/21/2008 09:08:25 AM |
Nice colors, but the face is a little bit to much to the left.
The top of the noose may never pass the line of the cheak. |
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07/20/2008 01:10:14 PM |
The color followthrough on this shot is awesome! |
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07/19/2008 02:42:57 PM |
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07/19/2008 01:04:19 PM |
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07/19/2008 12:33:21 AM |
lovely setup, common color, composition, ect. only distraction i feel the hand should not be there imo |
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07/18/2008 11:45:02 PM |
Lighting seems a little hard aroudn her eyes, but not much you could do for that under basic rules. I like the beautiful turquoise tones. |
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07/18/2008 12:29:48 AM |
The colours are just WOW. Super image, I love everything about it. |
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07/17/2008 05:05:40 PM |
WOa now there is a title that makes you take a glance over your shoulder. nice job with the colors, they all match together perfectly |
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07/17/2008 12:39:18 AM |
Hey Cheshire..... not sure why things are not happening for this image. Perhaps the title (and I know it is the name of the drink) is just to "in your face" for the prudish ones here at dpc?
I think it looks awesome, great job!
No vote from me obviously. |
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07/16/2008 02:08:31 AM |
Love the use of colour in this one :) |
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07/16/2008 12:14:44 AM |
Title made me chuckle!
Evan |
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