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04/29/2004 11:54:56 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi Carl, nice to meet you.
I'm not sure why you applied the blur, at all. I don't know that it added anything, but I'd have to see the sharper image. The blur here does nothing for me.
Also, why not pull back a bit from the bird, get more of the bird in front of the sun and shoot the whole curvature of the neck? It would seem a good plan.
The light is a bit bright, a bit harsh. Maybe if there were other background elements such as the sky or a horizon, we'd have more perspective.
Good luck and keep shooting!
Mav |
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04/27/2004 07:17:36 PM |
Sorry about the title I meant to put flamingo.
Message edited by author 2004-04-27 19:19:13. |
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04/26/2004 05:12:23 PM |
You've been a good sport about the title. Some people have no sense of humor.
Nice Silhouette. |
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04/25/2004 09:29:47 PM |
uummmmm, Flamingo yes? not Swan |
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04/25/2004 12:47:45 PM |
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04/24/2004 08:29:33 PM |
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04/22/2004 11:06:34 AM |
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04/20/2004 04:51:47 AM |
Odd but rather nice picture. It looks more like a plastic flamengo to me than a swan. |
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04/19/2004 11:11:55 PM |
Painful on the eyes! Yikes. Little too bright. :) |
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04/19/2004 10:41:47 PM |
The light is too drastic for my liking. I like the subject and composition - would have liked to see it with subtler light and sharper. |
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04/19/2004 02:52:33 PM |
You probably mean flamingo instead of swan. The image is very unsharp and the head still has so much light that one can see it is a fake. |
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04/19/2004 01:03:49 PM |
I'm sorry, but this is way too bright and fuzzy for me. |
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04/19/2004 11:10:57 AM |
A silhouette maybe, but the OOF and the glare is a bit much. |
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04/19/2004 05:03:47 AM |
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04/19/2004 01:23:18 AM |
Great colors. Noce shapes. Think it needs sharper edges to make it truly effective. |
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