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05/06/2004 07:28:18 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Composition: nice slightly off-center positioning of the setting sun. Good diagonals of the waterline draw the eye to the sunset.
Camera Work: (Focus/DOF/Exposure)- nice exposure and focus, with good detail on the water surface in the foreground.
Post Processing: you caught it all in the moment, doesn't look like it needed anything else.
Challenge: This fit the challenge, in my view (if you live near the beach). But I would have liked to see something else that gave it more context about the area. At the moment it's just a lovely sunset, I'd like to see more of what makes this Oregon beach spectacular.
My Opinion: A lovely photo. Nicely composed but a little on the ordinary side. I would have liked a little more inclusion of the area to help set the scene. Very good quality and you have good eye. Keep it up.
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05/02/2004 01:23:53 PM |
Very pretty. I would have given it just a very small black border. I think the white line detracts from it a bit. |
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05/01/2004 04:59:33 PM |
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04/30/2004 03:30:53 AM |
Very nice sunset with a nice peaceful feeling. |
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04/29/2004 11:49:16 AM |
Cool sunset picture..
Nice colors and feeling in it! |
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04/29/2004 10:51:59 AM |
Pleasant sunset. Unless you live under water, this doesn't quite meet the challenge, "Show us your village, town or city, from a new perspective." If this is from your living room window, a little frame or something to indicate it would help. Or the title should say something that indicates a village town city, imho. |
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04/26/2004 08:16:04 AM |
cant see your town there? |
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04/26/2004 06:00:44 AM |
Good shot, lacks originallity imo |
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