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09/07/2008 08:38:43 PM |
| This is really a great moment. I think it might have been stronger if you had cropped it so that she was not centered in the frame, though. |
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09/07/2008 12:53:06 PM |
| You've curiously left too much white spce behind her, shunting the action of the scene to the corner of the frame. Your angle also means part of her face is unnecessarily blocked in this case. Shooting from a higher angle, and making sure your framing allows us to see as much of the action of the shot as possible would have improved this. |
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09/04/2008 08:40:24 AM |
| there are some mistakes in this image for my taste, which is unfortunate because lighting and subject are good. The too distracting mistakes for me are the shadow to the left, which would have been easily erased in PP, and the fact that the right hand covers part of the face. |
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09/03/2008 06:17:50 PM |
| Nice shot but obscuring her face lets it down a little |
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09/02/2008 08:44:01 AM |
| A closer crop would help to focus in on her face more. You could crop more of the bottom and left. |
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09/01/2008 08:51:11 PM |
| beautiful except that if the little girl had held her hand down a fraction and we could see see her whole face, I would have scored higher |
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09/01/2008 07:26:43 PM |
| The shadow on the left perhaps could have been avoided with additional backdrop light or positioning a little futher away. Having the hand a tad lower would allow us to see the rest of her face, which is a shame to hide with such a cute subject. |
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09/01/2008 08:08:45 AM |
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09/01/2008 01:22:25 AM |
| cute girl, but you cant really see her face which is a real set off. lighting is really well doen though, so i gotta give ya props for that! |
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