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09/16/2008 09:03:42 PM |
an object with significant potential - the textures and light reflecting off the surface of the damp wood can hold a lot of interest - i am just unsure about the choice of composition and choice of areas for focus and not focus - in fact, it is unclear where the shallow DOF is pointing us... |
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09/15/2008 05:53:26 PM |
I think this would be improved by showing more of the subject, it doesn't look like a windmill from this angle, perhaps include more? |
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09/11/2008 06:18:24 PM |
The DOF does not seem particularly shallow to me here. Still, that's an interesting & weathered old mill you've captured. |
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09/11/2008 01:46:46 PM |
I don't see the shallow DOF here. Also the image could benefit from a levels adjustment. Also, if it were mine, I would straighten it so the windmill is vertical. |
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09/11/2008 09:15:23 AM |
The composition is awkwardly cutting the subject in half, the color is flat, and I can see no depth of field. Brown attempt? |
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09/10/2008 10:24:49 PM |
Unfortunatly a confussing picture... but I think the layout was great. I think if you backed up when taking this picture it would have been better. The only reason I say it was confussing was because I couldnt understand what that picture was until I looked at the title of the picture. Also the lighting could have been better the fans on the windmill dont stand out enough and in order for that windmill to pop you should have had more lighting on the fans. |
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09/10/2008 04:01:05 PM |
Image appears flat, and I'm not seeing the shallow depth of field. |
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09/10/2008 12:32:15 PM |
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