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Challenge: Proportion (Basic Editing I)
Collection: patterns
Camera: Olympus E-20P
Location: Chicago
Date: Apr 25, 2004
Galleries: Urban, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Apr 25, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 101 out of 290
Avg (all users): 5.3382
Avg (commenters): 6.5556
Avg (participants): 5.4167
Avg (non-participants): 5.2763
Views since voting: 1133
Votes: 272
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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05/04/2004 10:19:53 AM
I'm not sure this qualifies as "proportion" but it is a great shot, nonetheless.
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04/30/2004 10:34:36 AM
Dizzyingly attractive! This would make a lovely print! 8
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04/30/2004 01:47:13 AM
Very nice "pattern shot" - great colors. Not sure I can see any proportion....
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04/29/2004 06:44:52 AM
cool i love the abstract work
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04/28/2004 06:00:27 PM
great colors. Maybe would look better with the vent in a different place in the composition... No, I think you cropped well. 7.
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04/28/2004 04:48:52 PM
Great color and composition. The vent(or whatever it is) really stands out and pulls your eye to the difference even though the rest of the image is so busy.
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04/28/2004 04:16:09 PM
This would have been a far more striking abstract without the black grate in the top left corner. I don't really see how that adds to the idea of proportion or lack of it unless you want to argue that the distracting grate adds a lack of proportion to the image. The problem there is, it does so in an unpleasing way and uninteresting way. I think focusing more tightly on fewer bricks and shooting straight ahead instead of slightly up would have made a more powerful statement about the proportion in the design of these colorful bricks. The slight tilt upward is skewing the design.
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04/28/2004 01:29:43 PM
that picture dont stop to get my attention... event if i dont understand what kind of proportion it show.... it is quite nice....
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04/28/2004 09:39:26 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 4
Total Averaged Rating 5 Autool
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