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05/11/2004 05:33:24 PM |
| Interesting composition, disturbing somehow. (That's not necessarily bad.) Think I would have mobed a bit left to include the end of the broken x against the white and to see the axel on the wheel--maybe that's why it causes tension for me. |
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05/10/2004 10:50:06 AM |
| THe gate is out of focus which is really off-putting. |
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05/10/2004 05:39:50 AM |
| this photo really works for me...great depth and use of natural lighting...well done = 9 |
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05/09/2004 10:01:08 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
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05/09/2004 12:07:28 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 9
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating 7.00 Dick
The lines of the metal structure all converging in the center are distracting. You had a wonderful subject, try using structural materials to enhance the building. |
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05/08/2004 07:33:47 PM |
| I get the feeling the smaller image size hides a slightly blurry image that is way too centered in it's composition. The rusty bars seems more in the way than anyting else. Perhaps with better focus on the rusty part and less depth of field to take away the curiosity from the buildnig and surroundings? I'd used the allowed 640 pixels in this shot. |
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05/07/2004 11:17:10 AM |
| looks very blury. would have done better if the shot was closer to the object. |
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05/06/2004 03:39:59 PM |
| Excellent photograph........ |
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05/06/2004 11:09:17 AM |
| punchier light would make this fine shot jump out from the rest. |
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05/06/2004 06:26:28 AM |
| background could use a little more blur :o) |
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05/05/2004 01:39:09 PM |
| too small, out of focus, over exposed |
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05/05/2004 12:55:32 PM |
| I would crop out everything to the left of the edge of the shed. Even so, there is not much coherence in this photo. |
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05/05/2004 06:58:58 AM |
| Looks like the lighting overesposed part of the background shed near the center of the bars. This was a bit distracting to me. |
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