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05/17/2004 09:42:42 AM |
Greeetings from the Critique Club!
Interesting shot as I see you have heard several times, but what could make it better? Well, the center of the keyhole almost looked like it's plugged up with some lime goop or something. Your title asked us to wonder what's behind it but the shot doesn't give us any clues and nor does it make me personally want to find out. Maybe if you were able to focus more on the keyhole and what was behind it, making me want to see more?
The colors are interesting but rather bland to me. Maybe playing with the contrast or curves might make them jump out more. I like the composition of the shot and the cropping, the angle of the broken lock brings me from left to right and from top to bottom so nice capture there. I see this is your first challenge, not to bad for your first time out. There is a lot of potential here and I can't wait to see more of your work!
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further! |
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05/11/2004 01:10:44 PM |
| Interesting textures / color. The out of focus area in the middle is a little distracting, but you've chosen a very interesting subject. |
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05/10/2004 02:07:03 PM |
| Neat color. How does it look w/ the dimensions of photo elongated w/ the key hole? |
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05/08/2004 06:22:52 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 6
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/07/2004 11:05:10 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 5
Total Averaged Rating 6 Dick
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05/07/2004 12:28:17 AM |
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05/06/2004 10:37:54 PM |
| Beautiful colors and nice composition. |
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05/06/2004 09:19:29 PM |
| now this is cool. love the greenish tinge to the area inside the keyhole. |
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05/06/2004 01:48:07 PM |
| gorgeous green untypical aging of the metal |
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05/06/2004 01:21:04 PM |
| The colors are good here and the design is intriguing. Wish that major point of interest wasn't quite so exactly in the middle, but still it's a fine photograph. |
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05/06/2004 06:10:55 AM |
| It would benefit the image if the blurry part wasn't dead centre. It's hard to focus on the image because your eye doesn't know where to go. |
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05/06/2004 04:01:53 AM |
| What an odd colored rust. Interesting, none the less. |
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05/05/2004 06:34:57 PM |
| Looks a bit too bright, the colors are a bit wahed out, could use some better contrast and color adjustments mabey, Good luck :) |
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05/05/2004 12:34:47 PM |
| Made me look hard to see what it was--I saw the keyhole as advancing first! Sweet palette of colors. |
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