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05/19/2004 09:22:31 PM |
i look again, and am quite impressed that this is an unedited photo.
i gave it a 9 during the voting despite thinking it was generated....
well done.
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05/14/2004 10:04:25 PM |
Greetings from the critique club!!!
This is a great photograph. Very strong composition, compelling visually, and certainly abstract. You provide a difficult subject to critique in depth, primarily because of the high quality of the shot. But here goes!! I'll rip you as I can.
The first question that I ask myself is when critiquing is, if this were mine, would I bother to print it and hang it on my wall. In this case the answer is definately yes.
The second question I ask, is if I were a photo editor, would I print it. And what would I ask the photographer to touch up. Keeping in mind that I would only want perfect photos appearing in my publication.
In the case of Flow...I would ask that you crop a little tighter. The light waves being higher to the left, are tugging my eye to the right. But be careful, the central ovals need to remain center. I might ask that you fade the green foreground on the left, just below where the lightwaves start, to match the foreground rather than the background.
I might ask that you do the same on the right, only the opposite, blend more skytones above the first light ray. All of this said to acheive more balance, and to keep my from veering right. Do those things, and I would print Flow.
I hope that you found this constructive. russ |
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05/09/2004 11:55:08 PM |
| Outstanding composition. Gentle mood and lines. 10 |
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05/07/2004 12:06:01 AM |
| I like the subtle colors and shapes. I will be interested to find out how you did this. Good work!! and Good Luck on the challenge! |
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05/06/2004 04:44:42 PM |
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05/05/2004 02:43:05 AM |
| nice and simple but i like it. |
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05/04/2004 03:09:33 PM |
| simple but effective, great minimalistic approach after the abundance of shapes and colors in many others. |
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05/04/2004 02:16:38 PM |
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05/03/2004 05:14:54 PM |
| lovely soft color and interesting subject (i have no idear! a piece (pieces?) of string lit just so in motion??). anyway, great job. |
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05/03/2004 02:05:38 PM |
| nice, really like it. Very calming. |
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05/03/2004 07:44:55 AM |
I love this one
can't see how it could be improved and would hang it on my wall it gets my only 10 |
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05/03/2004 01:17:07 AM |
| best shot in the challenge. clean and simple. great job. |
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05/03/2004 12:40:50 AM |
| Pretty cool if you ask me. Wish the colors were more vibrant. |
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05/03/2004 12:36:41 AM |
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