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05/11/2004 08:18:41 PM |
I love this subject - the sign is wonderful as is the building with its peeling paint and stucco. I'm not sure if the angle is quite right though - I wonder if a straighter angle wouldn't be more pleasing. The proportions, focus and exposure are excellent. |
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05/11/2004 12:42:22 PM |
this is a fantastic picture. |
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05/10/2004 11:06:23 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
I feel a different angle, not so centered would help this a whole lot. somewhat overexposed. |
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05/10/2004 08:25:07 AM |
A closer crop would have been better I feel, making the sign the object of the photo |
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05/09/2004 09:37:05 PM |
Very funny, not a dentist I would want to visit. |
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05/09/2004 02:55:48 PM |
Very nice and very subtle. I go back and forth about the heavily shadowed upper part of picture.
An 8. |
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05/08/2004 04:51:39 PM |
This is neat however I would like to see a different compostion done. I am not sure how...but the windows are nice too...the sign is great... |
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05/08/2004 02:46:34 AM |
Don't know if I would go to this guy to work on my teeth, good pic |
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05/07/2004 09:04:19 PM |
That building might need a root canal........ |
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05/06/2004 08:44:50 PM |
Wouldnt want to visit that dentist.. |
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05/06/2004 08:15:02 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/06/2004 06:25:50 PM |
Great subject! Might be nicer if cropped more tightly - i.e. cut off the sky. |
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05/06/2004 08:46:25 AM |
Neat architecture. It looks like this was taken from slightly off center, which may have been your intent. I'd like to see it from a head-on symmetric POV as the symmetry of this shot could be interesting. Also not sure you needed to leave so much sky in the crop. It's almost too bright in contrast to the rest of the image. |
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05/06/2004 04:32:54 AM |
Hmm an interesting one. I like your choice of subject, the building & sign have a lot of character. Perhaps getting close would make it even more striking. |
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05/05/2004 03:58:48 PM |
I wish the sign popped out a bit more. Overall, I like this. |
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05/05/2004 04:37:37 AM |
Ouch.
The sky doesn't reallyhelp the impact of that great textured wall and very beat up sign. I might crop just below the overhang. |
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