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Rusty Gas Gauge
Rusty Gas Gauge
MrsFuzzButt


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Rusted (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix 3800
Location: Outside my shed
Date: May 2, 2004
Aperture: f4.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160 sec
Galleries: Snapshot, Still Life
Date Uploaded: May 3, 2004

This is the gauge of an old gas tank outside my shed. Rotated and resized... nothing else.

Statistics
Place: 316 out of 443
Avg (all users): 4.7619
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.7099
Avg (non-participants): 4.8378
Views since voting: 844
Votes: 273
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
05/17/2004 03:47:41 PM
Hi Jennifer,

Greetings from the Critique Club...

You've found about as interesting a gas gauge as possible but because of the other disconnected elements in your shot, the overall composition suffers. Each of the other elemement (tree, pipe, branches, blue wall, red slanted thing, sky) has the same treatment as the gauge (dof, lighting, weight in the frame) so each competes to be the main subject. If physically moving about to change the frame's contents, adjusting the dof, zooming in, etc. aren't possible then another gauge would be best. I also found the crank/handle's position distracting as it covered the dial - a 3:00 or 9:00 position might have worked better -- unless that would cause gas to come hissing out :)

The gauge itself has some great color and the lock and handle are interesting elements.

If you have any questions on my comments, feel free to pm me.

Regards,
Theresa
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/11/2004 11:40:34 AM
The pump here (I think that's what it is!) is fighting for attention, but being beaten down by all the other stuff in the image. The light in the upper left is very distracting.
05/09/2004 03:00:57 PM
Very distracting setting.

A 2.
05/07/2004 10:56:50 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 4
Total Averaged Rating 6 Dick
05/07/2004 10:24:02 AM
the tree in the background makes it very distracting and takes a lot away from the photo itself.
05/06/2004 11:54:35 PM
very good ..9
05/06/2004 09:42:06 PM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
05/06/2004 09:10:36 PM
Composition is lacking. trees are a bit distracting. the photo doesn't really 'speak' to me.


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