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Challenge: Benches (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S700 / S5700
Location: Fort Wayne, IN
Date: Nov 22, 2008
Aperture: F/3.5
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/18
Galleries: Cityscape, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Nov 23, 2008

Fort Wayne Rose Garden - the pond freezes over enough to play ice hockey on most winters.

Statistics
Place: 111 out of 126
Avg (all users): 4.8986
Avg (commenters): 4.8889
Avg (participants): 4.8235
Avg (non-participants): 4.9381
Views since voting: 816
Views during voting: 261
Votes: 148
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/30/2008 09:35:46 AM
very busy, bench is almost lost in the scene
11/29/2008 01:51:21 AM
Nice concept. Try getting a bit closer and watch your horizon.
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11/28/2008 08:31:43 PM
This is a fine photo, well captured and presented ... but diminished for me by the slanted lines. Maybe it was on a hill. Maybe it was on purpose. But I'd like it better straightened.
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11/27/2008 10:48:15 AM
I really like the swoop of the branch over the top of the bench, and the fact that it's a natural suburban setting with actual houses visible! The sheen of ice is apparent and the bright winter white of the sky seems quite appropriate. My nit is I'm not sure why it would be slanted - it doesn't seem to add in this instance.
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11/26/2008 09:42:16 PM
Reminds me of home!!
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11/26/2008 11:50:30 AM
very nice
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11/24/2008 08:03:19 PM
a nice shot
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11/24/2008 05:42:31 PM
Looks like a pretty place to sit, but I wouldn't want to see so much of the houses past the pond. A shallower DOF would bring more emphasis to the bench, tree and water, which would work better IMO. Also the horizon looks slightly tilted; if that's not intentional you might want to do a slight rotation to straighten the image.
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11/24/2008 02:17:21 PM
I think the houses in the background distract the eye. I like everything else though.
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11/24/2008 01:24:36 PM
houses in the background are kinda distracting. this does look like a nice peaceful place to sit though
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