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05/11/2004 11:13:28 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 1
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 5.25 Dick
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05/11/2004 11:10:21 AM |
A little too out of focus at the front, but the graininess creates an interesting feel for the image. |
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05/11/2004 09:33:06 AM |
Could be improved with less noise and the whole tube being in focus. Good effort though - I suppose you could just be focussing on the texture of the rust. |
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05/10/2004 08:03:03 PM |
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05/09/2004 08:18:15 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 6
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/09/2004 09:32:57 AM |
There's a lot of noise here. Did you add noise? You also have only a tiny portion of the photo in focus. Was that intentional? If not you should use a higher f stop next time. |
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05/09/2004 01:29:36 AM |
The image contains an extensive amount of noise with the end of the tube out of focus. I would suggest using a lower ISO. |
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05/07/2004 11:19:09 AM |
I like the effect? if one was used or is the tube merely out of focus...either way it's interesting. |
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05/07/2004 09:26:33 AM |
poor depth of field, the square opening is the subject, or at least a makor part of it, but is way out of focus |
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05/07/2004 09:15:32 AM |
I like the perspective, the rust color against the steel, lighting is good too.
It looks like the "tip" is out of focus. A bit more DOF would have captured it. It's a bit grainy, maybe a bit lower ISO. The texture from the rust blends in with the white background. A nice smooth background would have given you a good contrast and really made the rust, "Pop" out.
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05/06/2004 09:32:31 PM |
ooo this would be so neat if it was all in focus. good job |
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05/06/2004 07:04:10 PM |
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05/06/2004 12:43:16 PM |
very grainy and noisy. distracting |
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05/06/2004 11:25:20 AM |
You didn't follow the 2nd part of the challenge - "and then look for ways to compose an interesting picture around it". |
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05/06/2004 03:11:36 AM |
I think I would like this better if the rectangular tube was at some other angle to the edges. I like that it is at an angle to the surface it is resting on. |
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05/05/2004 08:00:38 PM |
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05/05/2004 06:37:27 PM |
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05/05/2004 05:36:03 PM |
The square pipe is interesting but the whole composition doesn't seem to say much. Focus/depth of field could be more refined. The image is very grainy--even the plain background! |
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05/05/2004 04:19:24 PM |
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05/05/2004 02:19:37 PM |
Don't think the graininess goes with this strong foreshortened perspective. |
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05/05/2004 01:57:16 AM |
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