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05/11/2004 10:49:52 PM |
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05/11/2004 03:32:04 PM |
| Almost very good, but I feel you needed to to have the screw in focus. |
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05/11/2004 11:56:59 AM |
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05/11/2004 11:37:08 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
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05/11/2004 11:24:18 AM |
| The "subject" seems to be out of focus. Overall, I don't find this shot very interesting. Maybe a different perspective, like from a lower angle would add some interest to this shot. |
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05/09/2004 01:59:56 PM |
I love it. I could be critical of tocus and glare, but I love the picture exactly as it is.
A 10. |
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05/09/2004 01:58:07 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 3
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
The DOF you chose would have been better utilized if the screw had been in sharper focus. That's the reason for the 3 rating in the technical category. Hope this is helpful. |
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05/09/2004 01:39:58 AM |
| The focus should have been on the screw. Otherwise, it is poetic. |
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05/08/2004 08:19:12 PM |
| the screw seems out of focus |
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05/08/2004 08:47:22 AM |
| Put the DOF on the screw, not the background |
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05/07/2004 06:43:13 PM |
| Sorry, but I just can't come to like this photo. I think it has a lot to do with the blurriness of the screw. Change that and I think it would have been a great pic. |
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05/07/2004 02:27:13 AM |
| the screw is out of focus.. i dont know if thats what you were going for...but i would have liked it better with the screw in focus...and maybe closer up would have made a much more interesting photo |
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05/07/2004 12:21:56 AM |
| screw seems out of focus .....8 |
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05/06/2004 10:26:21 PM |
| The composition is nice, the lighting is nice, the DOF is nice, but the subject is badliy out of focus. That cost quite a few points. This is digital -- shoot unitl it's right!! |
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05/06/2004 05:50:51 PM |
| Good idea, nice colours and fine compsition. A pity that the main object is so out of focus. |
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05/06/2004 03:33:34 PM |
| I think you should have focused on the screw rather than the table. but cute :-) |
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05/06/2004 01:39:24 PM |
| seems like this one is saying ... "screwed" |
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05/06/2004 11:28:07 AM |
| Looks like you might have just missed the focus area. Otherwise this would have been a great example of how to do a texture shot and have a point for the eye to focus on (that just so happens to be perfectly placed in the ROT position.) Very good effort. |
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05/06/2004 08:07:11 AM |
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05/05/2004 06:21:50 PM |
| You had a good idea in the composition of this--but it's lost in the lack of focus on the sheet metal screw. |
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05/05/2004 04:20:54 PM |
| Out of focus screw and overexposed. Flash too harsh, needs a diffuser or bounce. |
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05/05/2004 07:51:09 AM |
| Looks like the screw is on the move,? I think this could be very nice with the screw in good sharp focus, good luck |
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05/05/2004 01:52:28 AM |
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