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Challenge: Free Study 2008-11 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D300
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.4D
Location: Webatuck, NY
Date: Nov 27, 2008
Aperture: f 1.4
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/800
Galleries: Family, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Nov 30, 2008

simple portrait of my cousin Amelia.

very little post processing - just exported from lightroom for web (with web sharpening)

Statistics
Place: 263 out of 417
Avg (all users): 5.4248
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.5149
Avg (non-participants): 5.2500
Views since voting: 801
Views during voting: 242
Votes: 153
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/07/2008 10:05:27 PM
I really like your shot..good focus on the hat...soft for the face...and just fresh..
12/07/2008 02:42:47 PM
They had paused for a rest, and she glanced up while sitting there, flashing a small grin, content with the day.

In a few hours, perhaps, she would not have much opportunity for a smile. Life could find a way to take those moments away from you if you gave it a chance. Dinner to be cooked, the kids at your legs, screaming about one thing or another. Hubby on the couch, scratching the unnameables and absorbed in a game on TV while you yell at him to at least TRY for a change, and get these kids away from you for just a minute while you get the goddamn dinner ready, and his grumble in reply, yet he doesn't move.

Then the dinner burns and the smoke detector goes off and the dog starts barking and the baby smacks her head on the corner of the coffee table and you hear the toilet flush and the laughter of the two older boys and a sense of dread hits you like a tonne of bricks because, where are your car keys? Weren't they just playing with them?

Yes, in a couple of hours, perhaps the day wouldn't be the calm and serene day that it is now, with a crisp breeze blowing and only the sounds of the birds to break the silence and this man looking down at you and smiling back with love in his eyes, and a couple of hours away seems like a lifetime.
12/07/2008 06:18:06 AM
The softness here is a nice touch.
12/05/2008 09:57:16 AM
I think that the eye on our right needs to be sharper.
12/03/2008 01:05:57 PM
I like the expression and the composition, the colourful hat is nice, I do wish the dof was just slightly larger so the second eye was in focus but overall a nice photo
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12/02/2008 09:40:05 PM
A bit more DOF to include her other pretty eye would be better, I think. lovely composition. (not voting yet)
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12/01/2008 03:18:52 AM
lovely face...looks like the focus settled on her hat...I would have gone for a portrait orientation and really zeroed in on those eyes
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