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Challenge: Free Study 2008-11 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.4 USM
Date: Nov 29, 2008
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/25s
Galleries: Portraiture, Children
Date Uploaded: Nov 30, 2008

Convert from RAW in DPP
Open in CS3
Colour balance -24, 6, 24
Curves
Virtual Photographer *Still Life*
Change Blending Mode to Overlay
Opacity to 20% to give shadows some punch
New Layer
Virtual Photographer *Hollywood*
Change Blending Mode to Screen
Opacity to 30% to lighten skin and bg without losing detail
Flatten
New Layer
Dodge eyes a bit
Burn around hair and face a bit
Opacity to 50%
Flatten
Resize to 720px
USM at 50, .5, 0
SFW

[Dec. 3rd, 2008 06:10:34 PM]

Addition: I realize the extra white on the bottom is an issue for some. If you like, feel free to save a copy of this after the challenge and try it cropped off. This image didn't look good (to me) any way I cropped it other than the original, in camera crop.

I would love to see what anyone else could come up with to make this better or just different without losing the essence of 'her' within the photo. Post 'em up here in the comments and I will do my darnedest to check them out and take your suggestions/edits to heart.

Statistics
Place: 175 out of 417
Avg (all users): 5.7563
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.7364
Avg (non-participants): 5.8000
Views since voting: 925
Views during voting: 282
Votes: 160
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/06/2008 11:39:42 PM
Wish this had a bit more of white at the top in lieu of the bottom - bit a very sweet shot and well executed
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12/05/2008 05:49:14 PM
They never did figure out how she was able to do it, hovering there in mid-air, like some mini version of SuperGirl or something. Not that she had ever shown the ability to actually fly, no, that would have just elevated her to the level of freakish.

Yet for as much as she would do this trick of hers (while watching TV, or reading a book, or to delight friends on the playground), it always caused her mother's heart to leap into her throat when she rounded and corner to come face to face with her floating daughter.

In later years, when she made a fortune from her ability and was able to keep her mother, suffering from Alzheimer's, in the best medical care, it was often only this ability that her mother would remember, and every time she used it her mother would laugh like a child again. She may not remember her name, or how to control her bladder, but she would laugh every time. Right until the end.

She wiped a tear and closed the album and smiled, and then slowly lowered herself to the floor.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/05/2008 09:57:17 AM
Cutie cutie, now this is how to do kid portraits. I think I'd also like to see it with a little less white at the bottom.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/05/2008 12:25:16 AM
This one would be better IMO with some plexi or reflective white board on the ground to give a slight reflection.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/04/2008 05:24:06 PM
so exquisitely done... simple mundane studio portrait turned into something extraordinary, you either got real lucky or you're real good, I suspect the latter.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/04/2008 08:49:40 AM
great pov and excellent focus and lighting, I like the white negative space leading you in ... only slight niggle is her elbow being cropped off.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/03/2008 05:16:11 PM
A bit much white a the bottom..
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/03/2008 12:09:17 PM
She looks much happier here than in the Christmas card, Jojo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/02/2008 09:50:10 PM
I think this would be scoring much higher if she were the only thing in the white background and if her elbow had been included. I like the positioning of her higher up in the frame that we'd normally see. Original. (not voting yet)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
12/01/2008 03:39:32 AM
I like the pov and the lighting, but the composition is a little strange with the arm cut off and all of the foreground...not sure what that is in the background either...she looks pretty and I would definitly try again
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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