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How dull it is to pause, to make an end, To rust unburnished, not to shine in use
How dull it is to pause, to make an end, To rust unburnished, not to shine in use
NRRon


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Rusted (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: My driveway. Millstone, NJ
Date: May 4, 2004
Aperture: 1:8.0
ISO: Auto
Shutter: 1/40th sec
Galleries: Family
Date Uploaded: May 4, 2004

Late afternoon sun. No manipulation of the image. Hand held. I was fighting against the lengthening shadows racing up my driveway and a deadline.

Statistics
Place: 365 out of 443
Avg (all users): 4.4982
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 4.1988
Avg (non-participants): 4.9364
Views since voting: 986
Votes: 271
Comments: 15
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/11/2004 05:25:45 PM
Crop at top too close. Car tire does not add to image. Focus on the rust.
05/11/2004 11:05:55 AM
This image is impacted by the tire int he background. The top corpping is a bit too tight as well.
05/10/2004 07:25:42 PM
Nice framing (I would have liked all of tire at left in frame) nice light. The car tire helps to define this as a toy, but it cuts into the pleasure of viewing this relic.
The strong focus on the rocks in the foreground indicates the difficulty that is inherent in bringing rust into sharp focus. Except for the car tire, I love the setting, the angle of the sun's light, and the color of the plow.

Very nice job. A 7.
05/09/2004 11:22:10 PM
good composition ..... and im not referring to the title :)
05/09/2004 06:04:25 PM
Rather elegant title... I'll leave the rest unsaid.
05/09/2004 10:09:26 AM
a little dark and out of focus.
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05/08/2004 06:40:59 PM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
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05/07/2004 01:22:17 PM
Perhaps a bit tightly cropped on top.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/07/2004 11:46:13 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating 6 Dick
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/07/2004 07:38:33 AM
i used to have the same model Tonka.
05/07/2004 07:33:13 AM
Stop talking so much. --6--
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05/06/2004 10:53:56 PM
Is it a bit soft focus wise?
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05/05/2004 09:24:54 PM
Do you have the front wheels?If you do you might have a real prize on your hands.nice shot
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05/05/2004 05:12:29 PM
Tennyson needed a bit more light and a bit more focus for this shot. Also maybe less foreground it's cropped really tight along the top edge. :) Good luck.
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05/05/2004 12:17:27 PM
seems blurry, would have been good if it would have been sharp.
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