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05/11/2004 11:12:36 PM |
| I like the composition, the title, and the lighting. Well done! |
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05/11/2004 04:48:40 PM |
| The rust could have stood out much more. |
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05/11/2004 01:21:42 PM |
| A little bit dark on the right, and too bright on the top. Interesting composition. |
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05/11/2004 09:30:42 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 7.25 Dick
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05/10/2004 01:22:09 PM |
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05/09/2004 09:46:19 PM |
| Good composition and lighting. |
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05/09/2004 04:16:14 PM |
| Very dramatic. Perhaps a softer light from the back might improve this for me. Nice idea though. |
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05/09/2004 11:16:25 AM |
| the lighting is good, but it seems a little too bring on some parts |
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05/07/2004 10:30:30 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/07/2004 06:40:28 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 5
Total Averaged Rating 5
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05/07/2004 12:27:32 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, etc. 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
Does this picture meet the challenge?(5pts) Yes
Total Challenge Weighted Average 5 Bill
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05/06/2004 06:40:00 PM |
| Sorry. Not my cup of tea. |
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05/06/2004 06:33:20 PM |
| Nice composition and punny title. The catchlights make it look a bit too smooth and shiny for something that's rusted out |
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05/06/2004 02:23:00 PM |
| Hahaha, I really like the title. |
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05/06/2004 01:44:24 PM |
| A bit harsh exposure at a few places. Think you would have made this a lot better with more tolerant editing rules. Nice effort. |
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05/05/2004 10:41:42 AM |
Toning/color: You certainly got a good rust color to the shot, and I like the matching tone in the background although it seems to have a little bit of noise.
Cropping/composition: The composition is straight forward but it's good. The crop seems to center on the item(s) themselves without extra negative space, which is good.
Subject: They look like items from a car, but I'm not sure, and that makes them somewhat interesting to me. I see them as a constructed work of art on display. Certainly meets the challenge.
Technical: It doesnt have the sharp, clean look that a lot of studio set ups usually have. Some of the shadows work but there are others that seem to get in the way of the textures.
Artistic: Rust texture, light and shadow, gradient background, almost abstract feel.
Overal: It has potential but I think there are a few technical issues that stop it from being great - mostly the shadows, sharpness of image, and noise in the gradient background. |
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