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12/18/2008 12:25:17 AM |
Hello from the Critique Club ;)
Ah... nice but not quite perfect. I sense what you see here, but things are not lined up correctly and I am not talking about the ducks ;)
Ok, why did you get low scores, it might be because the ducks are not passing in order? the dirt in the water? the view a bit far?
all above?
Ok, technically not bad. Nicely exposed sharp photo. Focus seems like where it should be. But the composition here little off, I think you could go down a little more, give yourself a little tight angle and shoot bit more zoomed in, or cropped to give dramatic lights a bit more pop.
Oh well, try more options next time, and you should take more photos of this scene... very nice place :)
Checked your page and "Waiting for the chaos to begin..." is a very nice shot. I love it.
My friend, you do have future. Keep on clicking ;)
Leo |
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12/14/2008 03:03:06 PM |
| I like the ghostly skyline in the BG. |
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12/14/2008 11:09:14 AM |
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12/13/2008 09:03:16 PM |
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12/13/2008 05:13:55 PM |
| love the ducks in the water, nice one |
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12/11/2008 11:51:38 PM |
| The bright trails in the water contrast well with a dull sky, making an unexpected but artistic contribution to this challenge. |
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12/10/2008 02:39:34 PM |
| looks like little bits of dust on the water... |
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12/09/2008 04:16:25 PM |
| Beautiful neutral tones, very relaxing. |
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12/09/2008 02:41:43 PM |
The mood is of a sunset...though the sun seems to be still very high!
Nice subtlety of the light. I would consider to clone out some black dots and lines near the ducks. Good image globally. |
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12/09/2008 05:48:12 AM |
| I like a lot the atmosphere in this picture. |
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12/09/2008 04:20:50 AM |
| Lovely dreamy mood. Simple and minimalistic yet striking image. |
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12/08/2008 02:37:37 PM |
| Great use of foggy air. Nice texture and highlights in the water. |
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12/08/2008 05:41:09 AM |
| good use of the portrait format to accentuate the sky |
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