| Author | Thread |
|
|
05/18/2004 03:03:40 AM |
greetings from the critique club!!
Well, by reading your comments you can see that the subject of depth of field has the DPC'ers split on you concept here. I don't find a problem with your choice. In fact I find it compelling. I do find the crop distracting however. I think that the photo needs to end at the end of the fence line. My eyes are being pulled to far right and away your subject, the rusty pipe. saludos, russ |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
05/11/2004 11:18:14 PM |
| Wish you chould have shot this from the other side so that the rusted pipe was more "unbroken" and the chain link could have still trailed off out of focus. Good idea and good eye, though. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/10/2004 09:50:50 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/10/2004 05:13:15 PM |
| Godd idea, but I think the lower part of the background is distracting. I also thing the focus is too much on the fence and leaves the bar too soft. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/10/2004 03:00:39 PM |
| The colors of rust and sky go together well. Crop off the bottom just below the pipe and the right before you run completely out of fence and this is a highly attractive and powerful foto. As it stands, the uninteresting overpowers the interesting. A 4. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/10/2004 11:47:06 AM |
| This careful use of depth of field is perfect in your composition. The image keeps getting more interesting as I come back to it. Good one! Original. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/09/2004 12:20:39 AM |
| Nice perspective and colour, but the lack of focus spoils it, and also it's just another rusty object. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/07/2004 11:35:58 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 0
How well does it meet the challenge: 3
Total Averaged Rating 3 Dick
|
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/07/2004 05:02:26 AM |
| not much of this in focus, I really wish there was more DOF.. because it could be a great image. 6 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/06/2004 03:50:48 PM |
can hardly see the rusty thing
|
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2004 02:02:57 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
|
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2004 08:42:51 AM |
| Cool stuff! I love the perspective and the DOF and wonderful colors too! Good job! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/05/2004 01:39:43 AM |
| nice picture. uncreative title, but no points off for that. it would be nice if the DOF was slightly larger. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 08:11:01 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
